06 April 2011

Maelstrom (slightly revised)

Below is a slightly revised version of a poem I wrote yesterday. It was supposed to be a septolet. Now it really is a septolet.

 Wait
for the
maelstrom to
encompass my
soft voice. Then
return
home.




2 comments:

  1. A septolet, huh? New one on me! The word maelstrom reminds me of the Vikings! Cool poem.

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  2. Thanks. I really like to read very short poems. Maybe I'll try to write more.

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